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The Unwanted Writings

The DP tags your poetry "inappropriate". So what are you gonna do? You can't just let your words go unsaid! So, you put it down here, at The Unwanted Writings. This is where Edgar Allen Poe, Walt Whitman, and many other famous poets would have gone, their poetry deemed "inappropriate". Maybe you're just tired of having to resubmit your poetry so many times, because it seems that no matter how much you study it and look over it, it never goes with the Holy Format.
Whatever your reason, I hope you have found the place to put your poetry where others may enjoy it.

Rules:
(Yes, there a some rules)

1. This not the place to put hate poetry, or poetry that is way too sexualy explicit.

2. Please try not to put in poetry that has a large amount of expletives. A few are alright, just not three or four every line.

3. Put the title at the beginning and the author at the end, and try to use as the best grammar you can. Go by what others have, but other than that, there's no format.

4. Also, make sure to put your poem at the end of the page. Thanks!

Ok, I've decided to put some "polishers" up here. Polisher is a person who fixes the lower case, emboldens things, adds (') those, etc. Polishers have to be on alot, and the reasons I have their names up here is so that if they accidentally mess your poem up, you can talk to them about it and get it fixed. I'm not in need of any polishers, but who knows when I will be? Here they are, anyway:

Polishers
[Your Favorite Stranger]
[hh]
If your poem has been messed up, just give one of us a yell!

That said, write away!

Woo i'm soo honoured to be the first person on here!

My Family Portrait

Daddy brought a gun home today
He said he wouldn't use it.
He said that mommy broke his heart
He said she abused it.
And daddy said his life is over.

Daddy and mommy gave me Ella.
Last night daddy told us we were going to take a bath
But daddy just stood there touching us.
Ella cried but daddy laughed.

Daddy took Ella to the living room.
He told her to lie down.
Daddy unzipped his pants,
Ella started to frown.
Ella screamed.

I ran to Daddy's study
And rumaged through his stuff.
I worried about what he'd say,
He hasn't hit me enough.
Daddy never smiles anymore though.

I found the gun in daddy's drawer.
It was dark and shiny and big,
But i heard Ella screaming my name so I ran.
Daddy's gun was dangerous
But it would fix everything.

Suddenly I heard Daddy shouting naughty words
That he used to call my mommy.
I ran into the room but Ella was naked.
She started crying and ran to me
But daddy had a knife.

But daddy walked towards El
Holding it in his hand.
And Ella ran towards me
But daddy still screamed his demand.
He told her to lie down but she kept going.

I didnt like the way daddy was acting.
He wasn't normally like this.
He loved me, El and mommy so much
I wanted to shoot but I'd miss.
So i took El to the kitchen.

I sat her on the worktop
And told her not to worry.
"Soon Daddy will be gone
But he's really really sorry
That he hurt you El."

I went back to Daddy.
I saw him sitting and crying.
He saw the gun I was holding
And he said he was sorry
But I knew he was lying.

I went up to Daddy and stood up tall
And so,
I whispered the words "I'm sorry Daddy
You have to go."
And Daddy fell to the ground.

[ninja.kicks.ass]

Dirty Girl

Dirty girl, on the street.
To make her trip you stick out your feet.
There she goes, watch her fall,
Run away as she cracks her skull.
Naive strangers, telling me
They let her go, in death's she free.
Telling lies to pass the time,
Letting smack tell them it's fine.
Chain reaction, here we go.
The cops are coming; quick, let's go.
Every man for their own lives,
Everyone's living a lie.
Smokers watching me,
They only pretend to be free.
I hold the truth, I've got the light.
No one's all right in nobody's sight.
Dirty girl was on the street
The smokers were watching me.
To make her trip, I stuck out my feet.
I let her go, in death she's free.

[nokaredes]

Pain

You start getting tired,
struggling for breath,
The pain creeps up,
and worsens the stress.

Life deteriorates
before your eyes.
The pain creeps up,
for all your lies.

The destruction starts,
to take its toll.
The pain creeps up,
and eats your soul.

You find a gun,
pointed at your head.
The pain creeps up,
and leaves you dead.

Written by [tenshi-ryuu]

Who

What do you see, eyes, what do you see?
Are you thinking when you are looking at me-
A chubby girl, panties all in a bunch,
The quiet kid who sits with outcasts at lunch,
Who’s the girl with whom you’d rather be friends,
When you know because of you her faith in god will soon end,
Who seems to look over the signals you send,
And forever is nothing more than a friend,
Who now has cancer because of the choices you made,
Whose glances you dodge until her face fades.
Is that what you’re thinking? Is that what you see?
Then open your eyes world,
YOU’RE NOT LOOKING AT ME!

I’ll tell you who I am, as I walk my slow pace,
As I am surrounded by people who don’t see my face:
I’m a person with feelings that are yet to be felt,
Because it seems no romantic cards have been dealt;
A twinkle of hope is still in here somewhere,
A sought after light that I treat with great care;
A time son will come when that light will go out,
A time in the near future, I hold no doubt;
At my place, now I have the bottom rung to myself,
It’s a position I relish, but it’s my own little shelf,
A veteran at irony, a master of desire,
I hope that my twinkle will one day be fire.

written by [angrybuddhas.]

That Instant

As I wait to cross the street
I see the “walk” sign blink.

Although I've heard of drunk-driver deaths
I still don't stop to think.

I take some steps into the street
And hear a sudden screech.

Next thing I know I'm stuck to steel
Like some blood-sucking leech.

In that instant I didn't stop to think
About the horrid consequences of taking just one drink.

Then my life flashed before my eyes
In just one sudden thought.

All the moments good and bad
That every day had brought.

I hear paramedics saying
Prayers under their breath.

But that Instant of carelessness
Brought me to my death.

Written by [Moving on in Life]

I Did

Went to a party
heres what they said
have a drink
just one drink
so i did

started dancing
drinking hard
someone passed me a pill
told me to take it
so i did

loopied up
having fun
saw the bowl
they said hit it once
so i did

a few more hits
a ton more drinks
i saw the line
they said snort it
so i did

trippin hard
seeing stars
saw the boy
he said come to my car
so i did

sweaty bodies
empty minds
the condom tore
he said dont care
so i didn't

nine months later
can't see my feet
swelled so big
im paying the price
for what i did

took the gun
wrote the note
but it to my head
blew the hole
now im dead

Written by [evil penguin]

The other side

A bully once came up to me
Came up to me and said

"Give me all your lunch money,
Or I'll lodge my fist inside your head"

In shock and awe and horrendous fear
I forked over all my cash

I couldn't help but ask myself
"why was he so harsh?"

Now I stand, just right here
Down an empty hall

With someone's colloar in my fist,
And his back against the wall

One side tells me to beat him up
Because that's half the fun

But the other side screams
"drop him! Just drop the kid and run!"

SO quickly I make a simple choice,
As I lower him to the ground

I let him go and watch him run
Because a new path I have found

Written by [Moving on in Life]

Untitled

Wherefore art thou, oh my love?
No one knows.
Except to say thou aren't at home.
I gasp then run;
'Tis as I feared;
Thou hadst spoken of thy death as it neared.
I run; I stumble, I trip and fall,
But knowing i must get to thee above all
Driveth me onward, maketh me take
Desperate measures to follow in thy wake.
I know where to find thee,
Thou explained it quite clear,
How to get from here to there.
And so I ran, with heart beating,
Legs flying, I ran to the place i knew thou i would'st find.
And find thee I did: thy silent deed was done:
Thou layest quite cold in a puddle of blood.
I threw myself down, pulled thee into my arms,
Crying and sobbing and kissing thee hard.
But nothing happened, twas all for naught:
Thy beautiful soul, Death's minions had caught.
I looked down at mine body, covered with thy own life,
Inspired by thought, I searched for the knife
That had stabbed my love's heart.
I clutched it, then whispered, "I come where thou art."
So saying, I plunged the knife deep.
A moment of pain, then I fell in a heap.
The last moments of my life, my end of the race,
But it was soon over and I was greeted by thy face.

Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]

Broken Mirror

I look into my mirror
And she stares back at me.
Long we glare at one another;
No end is close to see.

Who's eyes within this face are set?
Who's hair of golden hue?
Who's tears are these that stream
From eyes of darkest blue?

Who's face is this, so very sad?
Who's eyes with shadows wrought?
Who's brows now crease together
With every weary thought?

I smile at this stranger,
Conjured from out my mind.
To my surprise, she smiles back;
At least she has the time.

I laugh aloud, and so does she,
'Tis like we're both the same,
Soon I find myself wondering
'Does she maybe have a name?'

We start off simply looking,
And then we get to talking,
Soon, we do it everyday;
I before the mirror stalking.

I stare into the mirror;
But not her face I see:
Instead, there is a demon there,
Reaching out for me.

I try to run away,
But the demon from the mirror
Follows, grabbing for me,
Its hands are getting nearer.

I get a close up view of it,
And to my horror find
The face it wears upon its head
Is nothing less than mine!

Terrified beyond all words,
I look, and pray to find
Something with which to break
The mirror, left behind.

A book, it is my saviour!
I throw it at the glass,
The demon- now it shatters,
Upon the lively-hood of my past.

I fall with it to the floor,
I share this demon's pain.
Horrified, I realize
All my efforts were in vain:

The mirror held the image
Of what I had become.-
My mind now oh so broken-
My body begins to numb.

I stare blindly at the mirror,
Now shattered on the floor,
Millions of tiny images
Of what is never more.

Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]

Peace

I stare into the mirror
Eyes of deep brown look back
Shadows pain in blood all behinde them
Like glass holding in an ocean
Of crimsion red and blue
No one knows what I've seen no not even you
I've told all my secrets and then a little more
But still you dont know what lies behinde the door
The door that leads into me
Like a rotten apple core
Slowly ripping apart my insides
Making me all torn
Cries and sobs escape me
In the darkest night
I think that I'm Alright
But we all know im not
Im destrought with thoughts of death
Losing my last breath
Horror pain and murder are in my little world
Twist and turning mixing together in a whirl
No one knows whats happening in my little mind
No one trys to find out by being oh so kind
As to cut open my head
Lay upon my corpse
Kill me on the bed
See the crimson blood ive shed
And whisper sweet words into my ear
Kiss away the tears from blank eyes staring
No one even caring
That as you pleasure your self
I'm already dead
On the inside no one sees
That im not who you think
I'm gone from this world
My body begans to stink
Try to wash me clean in your perfect porcelain sink
But my Hands wont wash clean of this blood
That you lowered on me
From a knife so keen to your senses
No one even saw
The terror in my eyes
But its ok
Because soon youll be found
And my body rest in peace

Written by [Ego Diligo Tu]

Imagine

Every morning I am thanking my stars
Feel so lucky having you in my arms
Wouldn't be the same without you,babe
There's not a thing about you I would change
I'm incomplete when you're far away
And when you're here,you make me whole again
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I foud someone who will make me say this and mean it.

Couldn't imagine life without you,
I want to wrap my arms around you
You're like a miracle in the month of March
I just want to kiss your face.

Sometimes I have to stop and stare
Might even run my fingers through your hair
Just to see that this is not a dream
I've got to see you smiling back at me
And I'm okay as long as you're okay
Don't have to ask, I know you feel the same
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I found someone who could make me say this and mean it.

Written by [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]

Tribute to our Armed Forces

From Pearl Harbor
To Iraq

On us they
Haven't turned their back.

Fighting all night
And fighting all day

Struggling under fire
To keep hostiles at bay.

Fighting for freedom
to uphold all our rights.

Yet when they come home
They hide from "The Lights".

They don't ask for fortune
And they don't ask for fame

Because while they're out there
They all share the same name.

So this is my tribute
For Honor's the call

For the men and women
Who ask for nothing at all.

©2005 Brandon Aaron Bessman

Written by [Moving on in Life]

Sorry everyone, but this page has ran out of room. Please add all future poetry to More Unwanted Writings. Thanks.

Alright people, here you have your banners link:TUW Banners. Also, to anyone who made a banner for TUW, please go and add your name under your banner.
Thanks,
[Your Favorite Stranger]

2005-06-17 [Your Favorite Stranger]: **grins**

2005-06-19 [tenshi-ryuu]: NEW POEM \/^n^\/

2005-06-19 [Moving on in Life]: hey, My "Tribute to our Armed Forces" poem is gonna get published! I got a letter in the mail the other day. It made the semi-finals in the Internatioanl Open Poetry Contest! I have a chance at $1,000 and a chance at $10,000! I'm so happy! And I thought I wasn't really talented.... STUPID ME!

2005-06-19 [tenshi-ryuu]: if its on poetry.com competition its a scam...

2005-06-20 [Your Favorite Stranger]: not to burst your bubble or nothin;, just don't wanna see you get scammered

2005-06-20 [tenshi-ryuu]: I have been (through poetry.com)... Its not a nice experiance...

2005-06-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yeah me too, i was like wtf when i figured it out

2005-07-03 [evil penguin]: congrats terini if its not a scam! and tenshi, i live in ottawa too, just not the 1 in canada, lol

2005-07-03 [tenshi-ryuu]: lol...

2005-07-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: I got scammed by another comany..only out of like 45 bucks though..but still..

2005-07-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: it's burns

2005-07-05 [Moving on in Life]: it ain't costin me a damn thing, and it was ANOTHER company entirely, anyways.

2005-07-05 [Moving on in Life]: you guys fear being scammed too much.

2005-07-05 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *cough cough* ok then we fear being scammed to much we were just warning in case

2005-07-07 [Moving on in Life]: paranoia, I say. I lived in Phoenix, got shot at 6 times, been stabbed, had someone break, and found a dead body in a canal 2 blocks from my home. And I'M not paranoid....So, what's wrong with YOU guys/girls?

2005-07-08 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *glares at you* we're not friggin paranoid it's just...oh nvm, i'm not going to waste time with explaining. just know that i am not paranoid

2005-07-08 [tenshi-ryuu]: paranoia and cautiousness due to previous experiances are two completely different things

2005-07-08 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *throws hands up* exactly!!

2005-07-09 [Moving on in Life]: .................right *sarcastic thumbs up*

2005-07-09 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *is very tempted to whack you*

2005-07-10 [Moving on in Life]: * whacks forgotten in play*

2005-07-10 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at you, then whacks you back...in play*

2005-07-11 [Moving on in Life]: *pokes forgotten* ha ha!

2005-07-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *poke poke*

2005-07-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *poke-pokes terini*

2005-07-13 [Moving on in Life]: *pokes forgotten in odd places*

2005-07-13 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *eyebrow hits the sky*

2005-07-14 [Moving on in Life]: ((??))

2005-07-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: umm, i was poked in er "odd places"....i was like "WHAT?!"

2005-07-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: umm, i was poked in er "odd places"....i was like "WHAT?! come again?!"

2005-07-16 [Moving on in Life]: oh, ok. I dunno. I just said odd places.... Use you imagination....If you are sick, I'll be slapped. If you anre "clean", I'll just be laughed at. It's entirely up to you lol

2005-07-16 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *slaps terri* thats for touching her at all shes mine i calim her!*steals jamie n puts her in big lushish cage n feeds her grapes adn pizza and beer*

2005-07-16 [Your Favorite Stranger]: ooo grapes and pizza and beer!! yay! *sticks out tongue at terini*

2005-07-16 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *grins and gets ajmie pillow* my friend she shall be apmbpered untill i gt bored with it and let her be normal again so meh

2005-07-16 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *eyes go like an anime charcters when they're happy* i get a pillow, i get a pillow

2005-07-16 [Ego Diligo Tu]: yes pillow for jamie*nods* and...a puppy!*hands you blakc lab puppy*

2005-07-16 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *squeals* a puppy! a black lab puppy! yay!

2005-07-17 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs n thinks of diabolical plan involing jamie* excenlent*evil laughter* oh uhh anything else dear?

2005-07-17 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *loks up at the evil laughter, but sees liz smiling nicely and goes back to playing with the puppy* no thanks! i'm perfectly fine! thank you

2005-07-18 [Moving on in Life]: *cries at a lack of a special person to poke in odd places*

2005-07-18 [Your Favorite Stranger]: awww *thinks* liz, can i have a terini? please? i want one

2005-07-18 [this user is dead]: im going to post one of my poems up here kk

2005-07-18 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yay! thanks for that dragon

2005-07-18 [this user is dead]: no problem

2005-07-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *grabs terini and sticks in cage* merry chistmahunaqanzica to you!

2005-07-19 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yay!! *looks at terini, then pokes him in "odd places"* wait, are you a pervert?

2005-07-19 [~devils_child~]: huh

2005-07-19 [Your Favorite Stranger]: long story

2005-07-19 [~devils_child~]: i know

2005-07-19 [this user is dead]: hee hee hee

2005-07-19 [~devils_child~]: ok

2005-07-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *wraps up terni in "odd places"* there now those odd places cant misbehave!]

2005-07-19 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *giggles* well, i figure the back of the neck is an odd place to poke someone, the nose is an odd place, the foot *giggles again* liz, you wrapped up his nose!!

2005-07-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles* no i wrapped up his "odd places" his very inaproprite to poke odd places*winks*

2005-07-19 [this user is dead]: ummm lol

2005-07-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *wraps up dragons odd palces to*

2005-07-19 [this user is dead]: hey why you do that for?

2005-07-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *shrugs n tyes you up to chair n pokes you with stick*

2005-07-19 [this user is dead]: *bites pokeing stick*

2005-07-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *puts muzzle on you n pats your head n starts eating pizza*

2005-07-19 [this user is dead]: hey this is not nice. *tries to get lose*

2005-07-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *looks at you n shrugs*

2005-07-19 [this user is dead]: why you doing this?

2005-07-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *shrugs* its funny*sets izza on your lap* because you cnat do anything*

2005-07-19 [this user is dead]: *tries to eat the pizza* this is mean you big meany

2005-07-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *shrugs* your point?*walks over to shower n goes to take shower whsitling*

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: this is very amusing

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *finaly steps bakc out of shower gets dressed and ties up devils child also* hmmm

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: grrrr

2005-07-20 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *watches laughing* come on devil! she does it all the time, look at me i'm in a cage with an..umm, wrapped guy, and i'm not growling! you said yourself it was amusing...

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: yea when it was happining to you

2005-07-20 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *laens against cage bars and stares at terini* haha, now you're in a cage...sorry bout that...but i didn't like you crying, so you know

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *yawns*

2005-07-20 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *tries to reach though the cage and pokes devil, but can't* hmmph....*lightbulb over head and evil grin* hey liz, what about if i want devil too?

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *looks around then at u and laughs*

2005-07-20 [Your Favorite Stranger]: i know, she's not here right now but she will be!! *evil glint in eyes*

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *looks at u* ha

2005-07-20 [Your Favorite Stranger]: what?

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *smiles*nothin

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *laughs super loud*

2005-07-20 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks up sleepily from the cage* heya, some people are trying to sleep...*curls back into a perfect ball*

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *laughs super loud trying to annoy u*

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: then screams

2005-07-20 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *jumps up and hits the roof of the cage, then come sback down and lands on terini* sander...

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: lmao

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *falls asleep*

2005-07-20 [this user is dead]: ^_^;;

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *puts devil in forgottens cage n gives jamie a cookie and a poitny stick** have fun*contemplates what to do with dragon* hmm

2005-07-20 [this user is dead]: * hides behind something and waits*

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: humph

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *picks up dragon n puts them alone in a room with a big cnaister that says do not touch to see what they do. Lighting busting aorund the container* oh hush devil you brought it on yoruself!

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: w/e *falls asleep*

2005-07-20 [this user is dead]: *goes and touches it*

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *moves devil into room with dragon to see who touches the canister first n leans bakc with note book out to write results of experment*

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *asleep*

2005-07-20 [this user is dead]: *keeps touching the canister

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs n watches as dragon fills with lightning body glowing and extreme pain flowing in them because of the pure energy*

2005-07-20 [this user is dead]: * smiles and giggles and keeps touching the canister*

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *notes behavior and tosses in a box of peperoni pizza*

2005-07-20 [this user is dead]: ohhhhh pizza* runs for the pizza*

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *watches as you trip over the fishline allover the place*

2005-07-20 [this user is dead]: * crawls for it and eats some of it

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *watching very amused* ha

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *smakcs devil* bad person*watches everyone with amusement in eyes* i ove being curel*walks in and gets dragon out of room and hands them pizza* here you were a good sport me be nice now

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *rolls eyes*

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: your to stuck up devil. In true honesty you are. I can see why its so fun to anoy you because you are so easly anoyed. And now even though this is fun your constant acts and remarks trying to make it seem like your above us is very irking. Lighten up and have some fun

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: i wasnt being serious sry

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Ya sure what ever

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *frowns*sry

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *unlocks door of room so everyone can do as they please and curls up in corner on bed reading more of anna kerinana*

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *sighs*

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pouts n then moves over to devil* sorry...well anyways we werent properly introduced. Hi Im liz*sticks hand out n smiles*

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: *shakes hand * sry im jus not sure what u guys were doing but im cassy

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *SHrugs* no one is EVER sure what were doing not even Us*laughs* ever read anna kerinina?

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: nope

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *shrugs* its good huge but good its an old classic book translated from rusian to english copyrighted in the early 1900's about russian aduletry and love and lust in the higher class such as princes and such it is so sad..

2005-07-20 [~devils_child~]: cool

2005-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: yup

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: so.....

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: whoa, i see you two got umm acquainted...the book sounds intersting btw liz *walks into the kitchen and yells back* any more pizza?

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: yea

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: where?

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: idk

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *rolls eyes* so very very helpful lol i'll look for it myself* starts digging through the fridge*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: how would i know anyway i dont eat

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks up from the fridge* yes i know...

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *smiles*

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *turns back to the fridge* we'll have to do something about that, everyone on here loves eating, well not really on here, but say guys@wiki and girls@wiki, yeah those...*turns and throws chocolate pudding at devil, hitting her straight in the face* eat up! *grins*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *spits it out* yuck i hate eating

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *slouches back* like you couldn't even get mad or something? for all my efforts?

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: sure why the hell did u throw pudding at me

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *rolls eyes and goes back to searching for the pizza* tha was weak

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: i know but if i really got mad i would get in trouble

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *chuckles from inside the fridge*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *looks at u* anybody got anything to throw at her

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *watches on curiosly*

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *laughs* nope i'm the only one with amo, unless liz has something for you...btw, liz, where's the pizza?

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *walks over to you,pushes you out of the way and throws pudding in your face* ha

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *grins through the pudding and begins licking it off* yum!! i love pudding, maybe i'll just forget the pizza

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *looks up from notebook* uhh oven there jamie to keep it warm

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *pushes jaime back over* i forgot u like to eat yuck

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: ooo nvm, i'm getting the pizza *finishes licking or wiping th pudding off then rushes over, gets an oven mit and pulls out the pizza* ahhh, food of the gods! *around a mouthful of pizza* whatcha writin' liz?

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *shrugs* just observations and thoughts this is my notebook of poems so its kinda a poem maybe if i want it to be*smiles n throws a donuoght at devil* eat soemthing! anerixic people scare me

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: im not anerixic *them runs over and tackles jaime who is enjoying food* DIE!!!!

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *finishes pizza and laughs at the doughnut covered devil* really? sounds interesting! *looks at devil again* yes please do, i can' have to at school if they decide you're too skinny and send you to the hospital or something

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs*

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: well you don't eat *laughs underneath devil* hehe, but i'm enjoying the food to much to die

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *smiles n makes notes about behavior in head*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *thinks of what else to do* hum

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: ahha *grabs the pizza from jaime and shoves on her* ha

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *whsitles*

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *laughs* this my friends, is going to require a shower

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: haha

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: not for me!

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *yurns head* wha

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: i dont need a shower you to do!

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *throws handle full of the pudding thatsa left at u* ha now u do

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *laughs and looks up at liz* if that doesn't do, it we have more

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *attacks devil forcing pizza down her throat*

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *attacks devil forcing pizza down her throat* ha!

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *laughs*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: yuck

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *grins* hahahhaa

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh come on devil, you love pizza and you know it! i remember watching uo eat at school!

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *grabs pizza shoves it in your face* take that

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs n trys to sneak off*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *grabs foot*

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *gets liz, a rope and a chair and ties her onto the chair* haha, some of your own medicine!

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *sturggles* ahhh no! please no!

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *laughs

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *glares at rope and it catches on fire and gets free making fire go out* i love being a witch!

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *thinks then comes up wih something* hah *uses air to bind you to the chair*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: uh huh

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *thinks n closes eyes chanting fire bulidnign aroudn me* La luna della madre lo presta prego la resistenza alla malvagità di sconfitta con il fuoco all'interno della mie anima e mente

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: whoa

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *fire breaks and i bow n mutter a smaller chant under breath* okay so *looks at surprised devil* yes?

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *covers the fire in an expanding sheild to protect everthing else*

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *stretches n stops fire* hehe i love being a witch i do i do i dooooooooo

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *laughs* i can make fire easy im the devils child

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: i cna also do this though*chants again same as above and slwoly rises off the ground a hole opening below me and a fire dog pack (50 dogs) comes out of the ground n my eyes light up*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *calls daddy*

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pats his head* high again!*flysa round his head* its been a while hows Lilith I herd you rekindled the old flame. getting kinda antsy in the pantsys huh?*laughs n sits on satans lap* but seriosuly how are ya?

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: humph

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *whispers* i think you spoiled your kid

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *looks up at daddy* please *trows u off lap

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *growls and picks you up by the back of your neck* dont ever touch me like that NEICE I am your aunt now respect me or your father also known as my BROTHER and I shall have to see about doing soemthing like sending you to boot camp understand?*growls at you*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *growls back* and runs over to daddy * donnt let her do that to me

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *sits back and watches amusedly*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: *pulls u into it* burn her daddy

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs* you cant burn me! dont you understand little child? I cant be burned for fire is my will my soul my being and for me to be destroyed by it would be such a sweet sorrow. but darling understand this. Your father cant hurt me either. even though he is my older brother. I am more powerful then him. He knows it I always have been

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: no jaime

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *rolls eyes and disengages molecular compund(means i disappear)*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: burn jaime

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: well no actually it mean that i cease to exist except for the little molecules of me in the air*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: huh

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pulls jamie bakc together* no diaperaing like the people in my one series of books i read...

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: hmmh, i've read that vamps can do it by just "drifting" the only danger in that is drifting forever and being stuck in the air as a semisapient being

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *nods n kinda*winks* ya i know its funny when there half there and half not then you can poek them witha stick*

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: uh huh

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pokes cassy*

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